Conventions of a Thriller:
- Suspense
- A Threat
- Enigma
- Victim
- Protagonist (Hero)
- Antagonist (Villain)
In our Thriller production we used most of these codes and conventions to establish the genre of the film. We began building suspense from the first 40seconds of our film. We used a pan long shot of a room full of objects that could potentially be murder weapons, or at least show a sign of threat.
We also raised a lot of questions in the first 40seconds, who is this person walking? Where is he walking to? And Why? The non-diegetic parallel sound also created suspense and create the mood we wanted. We also used a quick glimpse of the victim although we cut the clip to half a second so the spectator was unsure whether they saw a bloody corpse or not.
Enigma was also created in the beginning of our thriller because the audience see the victim’s body on screen but are unsure what has happened to her and by who. The protagonist, Jet, is introduced he shows conventions of a Hero but we’re unsure whether he will find the killer etc. but it is intended for the audience to believe he will. The antagonist is also not clear at the beginning but the protagonist indicates to the audience they know who it could be by having a phone conversation, this creates suspense/tension.
- This is an establishing point of view shot of the driveway leading up to the barn. This shot creates enigma for the audience because it’s one of the first shots and raises immediate questions; who is the person? Where are they going? And why? This shot is an example of restricted narration because the audience is unaware whose perspective we’re looking from and why. The setting is light and set during the day time, so it creates an uneasy feel as it goes against the norm in films, generally death and uncertainties are set during the night when it’s dark and mysterious. This shot includes non-diegetic and diegetic sound. Marlon recorded a soundtrack to be placed over the beginning of the film to fill in the silences and add the effect and create tension. The soundtrack is parallel to what is shown on screen. We also added foleys to make it seem more realistic, the sound of footsteps as the camera jolts, adding to the enigma in the audience’s minds.
-This shot is part of the title sequence. We choose to use a black font to show up over the brown background. The titles appear quite mysteriously to fit with our genre and what was happening in the film; young girl killed by an unknown killer. The titles featured over a pan shot of various tools, which could suggest a murder weapon? It also creates enigma in the audiences mind, where are we? What are we seeing?
In this shot the audience can see inside a barn, through the camera movement (pan). The camera stops on this dusty dark window, showing a contrast in lighting from previous shots. It also suggests that where we’re might have been abandoned for a while, creating questions for the audience to think about. A place of abandonment is a code of a thriller as many dead bodies are found or something has gone on there. Still overlaying this shot is the soundtrack to add to the mood being created.
This shot creates enigma in the audiences mind because they’re still unsure where they are. It also shows this place has been abandoned for a while as its covered in dust and cobwebs, the lighting helps add to the mood by the use of low key lighting. No characters have been shown yet so the audience still don’t know where they are, who’s involved and what’s going to happen.
With these three short cuts, the audience is able to see the camera is about to enter a door. The door is also very dirty which adds to the atmosphere of mystery, what is behind this door? The non-diegetic sound still continues overlaying the shots. Tension and suspense is created in the first 40seconds of the opening because enigma is being created. It is achieved by the soundtrack, the low key lighting, unknown location and the mise en scene, inside the barn.
This shot is where we see our first character, by his costume he is dressed like a detective and doesn’t pose much of a threat by his body language suggesting he is the protagonist. His facial expressions show he is maybe confused or interested in what has happened in this barn. The inside of the barn is lit by low key lighting to show contrast with the outside world, it also suggests something evil may of happened inside.
To introduce our victim, we used a pan to slowly reveal the dead body. The body is covered in blood and her shirt is ripped to show that her murder became a struggle. This shot was shot at a high angle to show the loss in power as she is the victim. We choose a female victim because in thrillers, stereotypically it is a female. Males are generally the strong brave men who are the protagonists. In the thriller, Scream, the antagonist is a male and in the opening scene he is seen killing a young blonde female *see pictures below. Again the shot is in low key lighting to add to the mystery and it creates an eerie feel, the soundtrack also adds to this effect.
*The Antagonist The Victim
After Jet has finished looking around the barn, the non-diegetic soundtrack fades out and is replaced by dialogue. It makes it clear to the audience he is a detective by the dialogue used. Sound is used in films to communicate a character and their specific traits, for example; Jet is a detective, so the dialogue is parallel to his character. A medium close up is used so the camera catches his facial expressions and you are able to see he is talking on the phone. It is also so the setting in the background can be observed; the dusty, untouched window is still visible and conotates abandonment. This shot shows who the protagonist is and the audience is left wondering, who is the villain?
This shot shows who the villain could be. The suspect is a working class young male who is in prison for committing a series of murders. His costume is simple, a plain white top. (Due to the suspect already being in prison, he would not be wearing everyday clothes.) This is filmed at a medium close up as it’s important to see facial expressions and body language; his body language is quite open as he is evil and knows what could be going on. Enigma is created in the audiences mind due to the dialogue used, “how the f*** could I have done it?! I’ve been in my cell.” Raises questions; is there a copycat killer? Who could have done it? Lighting is key in this shot. The LED light is coming from the left corner and creates a shadow on one side of Kieran’s face, suggesting he has a bad side, which he does and this is communicated to the audience. Shadows are commonly used in thrillers to suggest who the antagonist is.
In our thriller we show only two characters, but none the less they represent certain social groups, such as class, age and gender. In our thriller we are presenting Marlon (Detective Jet), Kieran (prisoner) and Aimee (Victim):
Detective Jet: Middle aged, upper middle class, white male.
Prisoner: 25, working class white male.
Victim: Young white female
Jet can be seen as a stereotypical detective by the costume he is wearing; brown overcoat, black shirt, black trousers and smart shoes. We decided to mould him this way so it was clear to the audience. He is also seen to be smoking a cigarette which can be seen in other films by detective characters, it can be seen as a signified prop. He has a higher power status than the young female (the victim). He is also part of a higher social status as he is a middle-aged detective which requires training and also earns a lot of money. This makes the audience respect him as they put their faith in him that he will catch the killer as he has been doing this for years. Jet shows little emotion for the young girl’s death as it is his type of job and he has to deal with horrifying sites day after day, crime after crime. His facial expression suggests he is used to a site like this, for example; casually lighting a cigarette with a faint expression. He is represented in a positive and negative light. Positive because he knows what he is talking about and it is communicated that he is smarter than the killer, (the diegetic phone call with the other police officer.) Negative because he is based on a stereotypical detective.
The prisoner is a working class male, this comes across to the audience because he has a common accent and doesn’t show any remorse for his horrific crimes. His body language is very open and relaxed, showing a sense of cockiness to the audience. Being a working class male shows his social class in a negative light but it has been based on facts as many criminals are from a working class background. We also choose the criminal to be a male because it seems more realistic and fitted the stereotypical role of a killer. It also makes the audience sympathise more with young female victim as someone like this has killed her.
I think Momentum Pictures would be a good institution to distribute ‘Jet’. I choose Momentum because they distribute low budget British films such as; Shame and 44inch chest. The target audience for our film would be British males aged 15-35, so I think this film would do better being released in the UK instead of worldwide, plus as it’s a low budget film it would save money. The thriller would also do better at an Independent Arthouse instead of a multimillionaire multiplex cinema. For example; The Duke of Yorks cinema in Brighton.
The Duke of York's Picture House |
For marketing the film, it would be released on a Wednesday as it would have to compete with Hollywood big budget films. By realising it on a Wednesday it gives those who see it a chance to talk about it, word of mouth, so by the weekend when people generally have more time might decide to come see ‘Jet’.
I think a good the best places to distribute our film would be; itunes, DVD, Television, Netflix and Lovefilm – because of our target Lovefilm and Netflix can be downloaded to Xbox and/or PS3 so gives our gamers a chance to see the film on their console.
Social networking sites such as Facebook have millions of users, mostly around our target audience, so the best place to advertise Jet would be on Facebook, Twitter and YouTube.
Social networking sites such as Facebook have millions of users, mostly around our target audience, so the best place to advertise Jet would be on Facebook, Twitter and YouTube.
This is the advert for Lovefilm, and it shows just how easy it is to watch and stream films onto your console, laptop etc. Lovefilm can also be accessed on a variety of platforms.
4. Who would be the audience for your media product?
Our audience would be young males aged from 15 – 25 because ‘Jet’ is the kind of thriller that would definitely address this demographic. I decided to collect some data from family and friends and put it into a graph:
This Graph shows that Thriller's are popular with Males under 20.
Our particular demographic enjoys other Thrillers like Law Abiding Citizen. Law Abiding Citizen is about a detective searching for a killer who is literally right under his nose. Although the film itself had a budget of $53 million (according to Wikipedia), completely different to our small budget but its because its a major Hollywood film.
5. How did you attract/address your audience?
-Since our demographic are young males aged between 15 – 25 we felt that the victim being a young, defenceless woman would create sympathy and attraction. For example; in Spiderman, the male audience have Mary-Jane, a young women who always needs rescuing. Young males enjoy the idea of being a Protagonist and saving their damsel in distress. The camera work, sound and mise-en-scene created sympathy for the victim and maybe also attraction…?
Even though the beginning of our product is quite measured and slow, there is a build-up of tension and suspense, and high tension is a convention of a Thriller young males enjoy, they enjoy an adrenaline rush! There is also a lot of enigma created within our opening, keeps the audience guessing who, what and why?!
I showed our thriller opening to a few of my friends and family who fitted our demographic and here are a few remarks about what they specifically liked:
"The opening creates so many question; where are we going? What's going to happen? Who is this dead body?"
"The pan of the garden tools works effectively because it makes you begin to ask yourself questions, what are/were they used for?"
"The lighting and the sound add to the mysterious atmosphere in the opening!"
"Once it's ended I wanted to know more..."
6. What have you learnt about technologies from the process of constructing this product?
7. Looking back at your preliminary task, what do you feel you have learned in the progression from it to the full product?
Since our prelim task I have progressed in my development of technology skills, how to use the camera to its full potential, sound and image editing, understanding how to construct an opening on a whole and my ability towards continuity editing:
Editing: In editing I have progressed loads since our preliminary task, not just with final cut pro but also sound editing. I can now confidently use ‘Final Cut Pro’ with minimal help. During our preliminary I had very little visual editing skills and could barely use Final Cut. With Garage Band I have always been quite confident with using it as it is very user friendly compared with Final Cut. I was more involved with editing this time and I think I can confidently edit now.
Constructing a Scene: I now understand how to create a scene based on the mood/atmosphere that is intended to be communicated to our target audience. It’s achieved by the use of mise en scene, sound, editing and specific camera work. By using this all together you can create any chosen mood that fits in with your chosen genre. Although we did use lighting and sound in our preliminary it wasn’t as effective as our thriller opening because we were trying to convey mystery and tension.
Continuity Editing: We used this in both of our preliminary and our thriller opening, as it is an important part of film making. In our preliminary I learned the basics of shot reverse shot and the 180 degree rule, both of these continuity techniques became second nature in ‘Jet’. With our thriller the pacing became more important. I improved my skills by being more alert to continuity errors and fixing them asap.
Camera work: We used the camera a lot more creatively in ‘Jet’. By using the camera more creatively we were able to convey messages from certain characters and we had a variety of different shots. In both our prelim and thriller opening although I acted in both I was able to film scenes I was not in and have a play around with the camera changing white balance and using different shots and angles.